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Welcome to LegendFire's Shredder! This forum is reserved for the most in-depth feedback writers can give. There are three sacred rules of the Shredder's esteemed halls: 1. Writers, post only excerpts of fiction in the Shredder. 2. Writers, do not put more than 200 words into the Shredder! 3. Critters, shred with fervor, but also with kindness. Constructive Criticism is the name of the game. We all struggle at times. Remember, please expect anything posted here to be ripped apart in terms of grammar, word choice, dialog, imagery, structure, suspension of disbelief, to name just a few. We're all here to learn and improve, so please be respectful of one another and enjoy!

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New Replies Pinned   Icon Critiquing whiteknight Icon
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New Replies Pinned   Icon The Magnificent Shredder
Clarifying the instructions 		Bird Icon
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New Replies Icon Dialogue Help Sarisa Icon
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New Replies Icon It's On!
I'm beginning to enjoy drabble and flash fiction ... 		AugustProse Icon
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New Replies Icon First Time With the Shredder :)
Just a little snip out of the intro of my story... 		Foxglove Icon
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New Replies Icon First few paragraphs J. Ventura Icon
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New Replies Icon Help! Wording issues Azrael Icon
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New Replies Icon Opening paragraph Steerpike Icon
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New Replies Icon More Dreaming NobleSavage Icon
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New Replies Icon Failed Escape Azrael Icon
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New Replies Icon Dream Sequence NobleSavage Icon
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New Replies Icon The World Revolves Around Me friesaregood Icon
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New Replies Icon The Fight Scene
A fight scene that really needs a breath of life. Shred? 		EllaJoan Icon
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New Replies Icon How do I describe this? Help appreciated! :) Ember Icon
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a poem in need of critiquing 		agateophiliac Icon
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Moved Topic Moved   Action Scene Shred
fantasy action scene needs shredding! :) 		Ember Icon
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New Replies Icon How can I make this more descriptive? Nick Icon
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New Replies Icon Shred This
An alternate Shredder Entry open for crits 		Syn Opsis Icon
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New Replies Icon Shred Music Soul Icon
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New Replies Icon Intro Music Soul Icon
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New Replies Icon First try with the Shredder!
"Missing Piece" 		AugustProse Icon
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New Replies Icon The Shadow Man Isalith Icon
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Moved Topic Moved   a song. unnamed yet
would like to know if it has potential to decide whether or not to fin 		Suchness Icon
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New Replies Icon Intro paragraph to my story. Johnny Legend Icon
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New Replies Icon Random Scene Music Soul Icon
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New Replies Icon Scene from the Guitar Man-Part II
Re-write 		NobleSavage Icon
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New Replies Icon Query Letter
Middle Grade Fantasy 		Tally Icon
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New Replies Icon Scene from the Guitar Man- Part II
How does this flow? 		NobleSavage Icon
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Moved Topic Moved   Tripping In Desire Nordstrom Icon
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New Replies Icon Something to shred. Pen^2 Icon
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.C.Dreaming of ... Icon : (Today, 06:53 AM) good morning
.C.Spiral Icon : (Today, 12:24 AM) ;D
.C.Pen^2 Icon : (Today, 12:21 AM) +rep
.C.Pen^2 Icon : (Today, 12:21 AM) holy shit
.C.Pen^2 Icon : (Today, 12:21 AM) active duty
The_Wolf Icon : (Today, 12:09 AM) Hi Jessie - would it be okay if you helped me too? I'm currently writing a military story.
JJessie Icon : (Today, 12:03 AM) Hey Spiral if you ever need help with military stuff I can help out..im military active duty...deployed a few times so I might be able to help with reactions
.C.Spiral Icon : (Yesterday, 08:06 PM) touch and go I guess
.C.Spiral Icon : (Yesterday, 08:06 PM) A few times I feel uncomfortable writing military stuff because I can't shake the feeling my characters' reactions are unrealistic
.C.Debaser Icon : (Yesterday, 05:58 PM) thanks, bye
The_Wolf Icon : (Yesterday, 05:58 PM) hope it goes well DB!! and catch you later :3
.C.Debaser Icon : (Yesterday, 05:57 PM) hope to see you on the forums again Wolf ^_^
.C.Debaser Icon : (Yesterday, 05:57 PM) well i better get going, ive got exams today ><
The_Wolf Icon : (Yesterday, 05:57 PM) nice :) I've got a couple of characters from my script I can use
.C.Debaser Icon : (Yesterday, 05:56 PM) nice, yeah theres a few soldier related challenges in the writing challenges forum if you just feel like messing around with a military character
The_Wolf Icon : (Yesterday, 05:55 PM) military ^_^
.C.Debaser Icon : (Yesterday, 05:54 PM) whats your style? modfic? horror? fantasy? scifi?
The_Wolf Icon : (Yesterday, 05:53 PM) goodie =D
.C.Debaser Icon : (Yesterday, 05:53 PM) in fact you only just missed a fic contest a couple weeks ago
.C.Debaser Icon : (Yesterday, 05:53 PM) theres one coming up in november
The_Wolf Icon : (Yesterday, 05:53 PM) any fiction contests?
.C.Debaser Icon : (Yesterday, 05:52 PM) yeah i love the contests they have here. to me its not about the prizes, its just fun sharing and showcasing everyones best efforts
The_Wolf Icon : (Yesterday, 05:51 PM) I will :D
The_Wolf Icon : (Yesterday, 05:51 PM) *shares with DB*
.C.Debaser Icon : (Yesterday, 05:51 PM) so, think youre going to try your luck at the poetry contest?
.C.Debaser Icon : (Yesterday, 05:51 PM) Very good *passes wolf a cookie*
The_Wolf Icon : (Yesterday, 05:50 PM) and I promise I won't be bad
The_Wolf Icon : (Yesterday, 05:50 PM) I'll love being here ^_^
.C.Debaser Icon : (Yesterday, 05:50 PM) yeah LF is pretty relaxed with censorship as long as you dont do anything completely disgusting :lol:
.C.Debaser Icon : (Yesterday, 05:49 PM) oh yeah
The_Wolf Icon : (Yesterday, 05:49 PM) writingforums.org
The_Wolf Icon : (Yesterday, 05:49 PM) it's not as strict
.C.Debaser Icon : (Yesterday, 05:49 PM) which one was that?
The_Wolf Icon : (Yesterday, 05:49 PM) loving it :) it's a lot nicer than the other forum I was on.
.C.Debaser Icon : (Yesterday, 05:48 PM) so, liking the forums so far?
The_Wolf Icon : (Yesterday, 05:48 PM) no worries DB :)
.C.Debaser Icon : (Yesterday, 05:47 PM) btw wolf, ive only got a few minutes. im supposed to heading to school in a few
.C.Debaser Icon : (Yesterday, 05:47 PM) sounds exciting
The_Wolf Icon : (Yesterday, 05:47 PM) not much - just waiting to hear back from a production company about my script synopsis that I sent them today
.C.Debaser Icon : (Yesterday, 05:46 PM) whats up?
The_Wolf Icon : (Yesterday, 05:45 PM) hey DB :)
.C.Debaser Icon : (Yesterday, 05:44 PM) hey james
.C.Debaser Icon : (Yesterday, 04:47 PM) omg I finally broke my personal best for word count. It was 6000andsomething. My new record is now 10028!!!
.C.Dreaming of ... Icon : (Yesterday, 01:59 PM) I had a dream last night that I hopped a train and went south. Took me forever to wake up. I really was concerned I had done it.
Eeonita Icon : (Yesterday, 12:46 PM) I can't seem to shake off this feeling that I'm still sleeping. What can I do awake that I absolutely cannot do while sleeping? I need to convince myself lol
Eeonita Icon : (Yesterday, 12:08 PM) I'd never see another chocolate bar for the rest of my life, then!
friesaregood Icon : (05 September 2010 - 09:57 PM) Offer yourself a chocolate bar if you write a short story you can be proud of. :)
.C.Dreaming of ... Icon : (05 September 2010 - 09:48 PM) I won. Against medicated writers block no less. Now all I need in motivation
friesaregood Icon : (05 September 2010 - 09:47 PM) lol, did it at least help with the writers block?
.C.Dreaming of ... Icon : (05 September 2010 - 09:09 PM) I once used NaNo to get through a year long writers block. Still didn't get very far. Not sure why.
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